school

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school

bleeding deathly pain inside
but now without permission
my eyes start to cry
sitting alone in a room thats filled
a few glances is all
no questions of care
as if im just not there
its the end of this class
now walking away the teacher wont
dare to ask me to stay
but this school is so great
or so they say

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lonewolf commented on school

11-28-2009

life is a 2 way street , sweetie. sometimes people dont always notice the pain, but its ok to ask to talk with someone. keep your chin up, you'll be ok. this i s a good write.

The true philosopher and the true poet are one, and a beauty, which is truth, and a truth, which is beauty, is the aim of both.

Ralph Waldo Emerson, American Poet (1803-1882)

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