Happiness Ellusive

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Happiness Ellusive

Happiness Ellusive
The smiles so inconclusive
The haunting laughter
So putirfying
The mockery of those who are
Forever dying
The right to receive
From the abusive
Happiness Ellusive

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Queenofblades07 commented on Happiness Ellusive

09-01-2013

Very creative in such a short verbal form of poetry. You have a spelling error but I understood.

ivecute77 commented on Happiness Ellusive

12-12-2008

WAS THAT ONE WORD SUPOSED TO BE PURIFYING

Poetry comes nearer to vital truth than history.

Plato (BC 427-BC 347) Greek philosopher.

JEAGLEFEATHER’s Poems (25)

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It's Down To This 18
Another Drunkard's Attempt At Thinking 11
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Are You In The Mirror? 5
Life As It Is 4
Pieces Of Diety 34
Dream Me Dark 6
Happiness Ellusive 2
Among Smoke And Ash 4
In Quiet Do I Awake 2
In Silence Do I Answer 6
Down By The Darkside 2
The Summer Of Cassandra 3
Native Land 9
Your Best Friend 3
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I Once Happy 3
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