Heart Beat

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    Heart Beat
    Every time my heart beat
    It makes me think of you.
    Just wondering what your doing tonight
    Or if your with someone new.

    They say "True Love will never die"
    So why do I want to cry.
    You are the reason I go on each day
    Knowing you are only a heartbeat away.

    You cover me with your love
    You are my angel from above.

    Don't never stop what you do
    My heart only beats for you.

    I love you, and you love me
    I knew this was to be.

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    poetryrules commented on Heart Beat

    11-24-2009

    Hmmm, garbled meaning. Starts like a breakup poem, then seems like a death poem, ends with we're so happy together. Confusing to me. 2 Rhyme patterns; first stanza is abcb, then we switch to aa bb. Why? First line should be 'heart beats' with an 's.' Lines 3 and 4 should read 'you're' not your.
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    Poetry is not an expression of the party line. It's that time of night, lying in bed, thinking what you really think, making the private world public, that's what the poet does.

    Allen Ginsberg (1926-1997) U.S. poet.

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