I Can't Love You That Way

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    I Can't Love You That Way
    You could give me all your pure-hearted love
    And I would take it, firmly with pride
    I could steal your kisses all night long
    The passion flowing in your eyes
    When you say you love me
    And have since the start
    There's something that I need to say
    I can't love you with all my heart 
    I'm praying for an answer
    Untangling the knot that's tied
     To search for reasons that I'm broken
    But wonderously, there's no light
    So I'll stay around to see you smile
    You've pursued me more than they
    Your hearts beats for me,
    I see that child
    But I can't love you that way...

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    stever commented on I Can't Love You That Way

    04-26-2013

    this could make really good song..i think somtimes hard to get the exact words to fit loe it ...StEvEr
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    AngelG commented on I Can't Love You That Way

    04-28-2011

    Makes sense with how i felt about a person before..just recently..i like it..awesome work
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    lonewolf commented on I Can't Love You That Way

    03-20-2011

    you sdhould expand on this and make it a song.... its really good, i love it. going to my faves.
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    Len commented on I Can't Love You That Way

    03-19-2011

    Good Job! I think you have done one of the most difficult things women have to do from time to time, and that is put your feelings into words that a man can understand. Again Good Job!!!!!
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    Ralph Waldo Emerson, American Poet (1803-1882)

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