Where Did You Go?

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  • Lyrics

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    Wrote this as a song in my head. Hopefully it translates to a poem as well. :)

    Where Did You Go?

    In the night
    I felt you near
    Though you're away now
    I still hear
    Every word
    You said to me
    And now I say
    Please don't leave

    Where have you gone?
    You could follow me
    I'd lead you home
    We'd stay in between
    These hollow walls
    You built for me
    Oh dear, please

    Well I don't
    Like being weak
    But just for you
    I'm on my knees
    For in my head
    You're all I need
    Should I believe,
    in the thoughts?
    In these dreams?

    Where did you go?
    You needed space to think
    You love me so
    I'm so glad you see
    All the stars
    That led you back
    Back to these walls
    You built for me

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    Helios commented on Where Did You Go?

    02-10-2011

    Lyricism is a great talent to have, especially when the darkness of night comes calling. A nice song [if you write a melody for it].
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    StandingBear commented on Where Did You Go?

    01-13-2011

    Nicely written song you have playing in your head, and translated into a fine poem also. SBear
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    Phoenix9 commented on Where Did You Go?

    01-11-2011

    very much a tune rolls around inside of me as i read this, the flow is musical and takes you on a ride, Great job,, PHOENIX
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    JadedJezzabel commented on Where Did You Go?

    01-05-2011

    very well written.......i know this feeling well...........
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    BrokenHeart2009 commented on Where Did You Go?

    01-04-2011

    It does sound like a song. It is sounds mystical. 10 from me:)
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    Poetry is what is lost in translation.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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