I feel
I feel as if I have no one.
When I cry
who holds me?
No one!
When I am scared
who comfort me?
No one!
When I am down
who pulls me up?
No one!
Is there anyone
understands how I feel?
No one!
I feel as if I have no one.
I feel
1 Comments
- Gertrude
- shhhh! If you're quiet you will hear the sound of my heart breaking.
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jademelissa74 commented on I feel
08-12-2009
- At face value, this poem is painfully crafted and vividly expressed. You convey your feelings very well. The emotions are felt within. In realistic perspective, there is always someone that cares :)) God bless! You did an outstanding job!
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08/12/2009
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