If You Knew

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    • Christina13
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    If You Knew
    Q:If you knew this breath
    ,This moment was your last,
    Would you savor it like
    A cigerett after sex,
    Or waist it like
    You waisted your
    Life?

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    Madelynn commented on If You Knew

    09-08-2009

    ARE YOU SERIOUS!?-You are This kick-flippin-butt of a writer!!I had not a clue what I was just steppin into-..then I stepped!Stopped!Read Again!-then Again!!-and just shook my head back and forth,with a holy crap/she has the mind for it-look on my face!-Christine!!-I love stuff like this.Me and my bro call this stuff Mind Gumbo;this is cool hun.very! Sexy and radical,and conflicting with inner search,all in the context of what-like 6lines-and one word?Ima smilin'big ten smiles!
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    Christina13

    10/10/2009

    Thanx! Appreciate it. Glad you liked it, not bad seeing how I wrote it for a poem of “self discovery” for Writing Class, especially considering I wrote it in like a minute.

    WordSlinger commented on If You Knew

    08-22-2009

    i love lol, can I get a jump start, wow sis, on ehas found ya since ya posted, it;s ok I love ya, :P
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    WordSlinger

    08/22/2009

    I see the Rate RIPPER RATED you

    Christina13

    08/29/2009

    Thanx. I just hope others like it as much as you do.

    Letitflow commented on If You Knew

    12-15-2008

    I like the food for thought. Reminds me of time that i have wasted that i wish i could change. It's deep!
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    Christina13

    08/29/2009

    Thanx. I just wish we all could see that it's better to regret what you've done, then what you havn't done.

    Poetry is not the expression of personality but an escape from personality.

    T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

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