Not So Perfect

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    Not So Perfect

    Say this world is

    Not so perfect

    Say it’s a fact

     

    We can live in

    HELL

    For a while---

    If you like

     

    High on a shelf

     Is a piece of my heart

    Meant for you and no one else

     

    It’s the last day

    On this earth

    And only and I

    Remain

     

    So tell me

    This world is not so perfect

    When you’re in it with me

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    Madelynn commented on Not So Perfect

    10-12-2009

    Oooh-pretty flippin' deep Christina! I love the Statement your hitting at on this piece of love wrapped in darkness!this line right here';We can live in HELL for awhile-if you like'-is perfect playfully dark provocotion of words.I could almost see you smile as you said it!-love that. Not to mention,it would look kickbutt on a teeshirt,LOL.This piece is SO Christina!Thats why,once again it is perfect!Glad you back hun.
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    Christina13

    10/12/2009

    AHHHHHHHHH! I'M TOUCHED IN ALL THE WRONG SPOTS LOL! Thanx! Again My Little Sand Monkey is to thank for the inspiration. Glad to be back.

    Poetry is not the expression of personality but an escape from personality.

    T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

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