Im Sorry

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  • is at the point of a writters block...aaahhhh so frustrating

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This poem was written when I was placed in West Oaks Hospital. I had been running away from home and really bad in to drugs and drinking. I only thought about myself and never thought how my actions hurt the people who loved and cared for me. I wanted to say sorry and make up for the things I did and said and this is what came out.

Im Sorry

Im sorry for all the times I lost my temper
For the times when I was rude
For all the gifts that were given   
And never recieved thank you's
For all the love you given me
And I haven't given back
For all the times you were patient
A virtue that I lack
Im sorry for all the people
To whom I was so cruel
To all the people I laughed at
I acted like a fool
I couldn't see past my imperfections
I couldn't see past my pride
Your feelings I trampled all over
On my high horse I would ride
Im sorry for all the times I lied
For the people I hurt along the way
Not a day goes by that I don't regret it
And i'll take it back anyday
The only person i cared about
Was me and only me
And now im truly sorry
I only wish I could make you see
Im sorry for everything i've done
For all the people I let down
Im only asking for a second chance
So I can turn things back around
I know that it's a little late
My deeds can't be undone
I realize now that I was wrong
And im sorry everyone

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When power leads man towards arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the area of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.

John F. Kennedy (1917-1963) Thirty-fifth President of the USA

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