The Hidden Love Inside

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    Poem Commentary

    This was written for Angel. We had our ups and downs but love is love with out a doubt

    The Hidden Love Inside

     I sit here quitely, secretly looking at you, wondering if you know
    All these wonderful feelings I have inside, the ones that don't seem to show
    I try to tell you in all these words, but I feel i've said them all
    The love we share, what you make me feel, makes my world grow tall
    I've told you that i love you in more ways then one
    Those three little words, I love you, doesn't get the job done
    I change the words to just how much you mean to me
    But those conversations and phrases just repeat all over you see
    I've written you love letters and said querky lovey dovey lines
    But these things have not and will not tell you the shivers in my spine
    So as i sit here quitely, secretly looking at you, wondering if you know
    There are no words to tell you i love you besides the feelings that show

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    rachelleann28 commented on The Hidden Love Inside

    09-07-2009

    Wow!! I love this one!!! Its like how I feel, but I could have never put it into a poem like this!!!! Great job!!!
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    A poem begins as a lump in the throat, a sense of wrong, a homesickness, a lovesickness. It finds the thought and the thought finds the words.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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