My Body

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    • supermancdr
    • is at the point of a writters block...aaahhhh so frustrating

    Poem Commentary

    This poem was also written when i was changing from a young girl to a woman.

    My Body

     I feel my body slowly starting to change
    All these things I encounter seem so strange
    My head and my body feel so deranged
    As time goes by everything seems so out
    I grab my skin and scream and shout
    Temptation is weird, always hurts, someone wants to pout
    Scaredness I encounter like a weather drought
    Always there
    My only body, wish I had a spare
    To ask for help, do I even dare
    I don't like the way I fear
    Fear the world and what is here
    This world will end in a mere
    A mere moment in time
    During the day the sun doesn't shine
    Everything i do seems to me is a crime
    Wondering if one day i can control a moment and have it be 
                                   mine
    Wondering if my body and actions will ever be fine

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    rachelleann28 commented on My Body

    09-07-2009

    I really like this one..it has alot of depth to it!!! good poem!!
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    In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite.

    Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.

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