Letter To The First Born

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    You never know if you will make it to see tomorrow and if you didn't everybody would like to say a last few words.  At the time I worte this I was thinking about something happening to me and what I would say to my kids, and thats how Letter to The First Born came to be.

    Letter To The First Born

     If I shall ever leave you
    Before your time know this
    The love I bared for thee was unconditional
    Pay no mind to what close ears say about me
    For they never knew the true me
    Know that I worked toward your future
    And walked this earth as a woman
    You shall also walk as a man
    And always keep the wind behind you
    And your feet above the ground
    Strive, struggle, survive, dream fantasys
    Way beond this reality and apply energy to make it so
    Obstacles will come, break through them
    Enemies will appear. Peirce them with your holy arrows
    Liars will come up to decieve you
    Blow them away with your mighty breath
    Pain will come to make you suffer
    Absent it with your chest strength foward
    Tears will form in your eyes, wipe them away with haste
    Society will pressure you. Uplift the burden with prayers
    Your friends will turn on you
    Stay close to the ground and walk lightly
    Love will come for you
    Stand tall and embrace it like a man

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    In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite.

    Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.

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