It Could Have Been A Good Life


  • Misery

    Poem Commentary

    Ich Bin Ein Tenant of Misery.

    It Could Have Been A Good Life

    Bright Eyes blaring wide
    Slowly Closing inch by inch
    Day by day
    To the chorus of the tide
    Drenched in misery
    Life just keeps passing by
    One day the wall of death
    Shall come crashing down on me
    And the tears shall flow substantially
    And no amount of begging or yearning for the past
    Shall bring to me more time
    And I will know that what was
    Will never be again
    And what could have been
    Will forever remain out of reach
    And I'll know
    That this is goodbye
    And my one chance
    It Could have been a good life

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    bforibus commented on It Could Have Been A Good Life


    i love ths poem. it felt of misery, but a so what. the flow was so beautiful and rhyming was great. enjoyed it

    The true philosopher and the true poet are one, and a beauty, which is truth, and a truth, which is beauty, is the aim of both.

    Ralph Waldo Emerson, American Poet (1803-1882)

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