I Rhyme With Hate


  • Death

    I Rhyme With Hate

    I Won't ever give in Again

    Your smile is always Lying

    It's odd

    That I was Ever even Trying

    I'll just put an end to all Love

    Because there is no God

    Up there Above

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    OriginalCyn commented on I Rhyme With Hate


    Very well written. Sad and dark though, but I know sometimes even the best of us feel broken.

    KristyLoren commented on I Rhyme With Hate


    Read my profile when you have a chance, and please believe there is a Great and wonderful God above, I should be ashamed but I get mad at him too, but he has also given me wonderful things in my life and Kudos on your writing, short yet very deep and interesting. NICE work

    jademelissa74 commented on I Rhyme With Hate


    At face value this poem is fearful, dark and very sad. In my reality there is a wonderful God that loves you beyond comprehension. I am not trying to preach :) Your poem is conveyed with darkness. Fulfilling your "Death" tag. Great job!

    connsk8 commented on I Rhyme With Hate


    ah, but there is, first you must find it in your self, sweetie...

    In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite.

    Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.

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