• Lost Love

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    I go through a hundred different emotions when my heart breaks, however they all feel the same-lonely.


    The silence fills the air,
    Leaving me alone and bare,
    I reach out to touch you,
    Like I always do,
    But only now there is an empty space,
    A reminder of the silence of this lonely place,
    You have left me for another,
    You must have forgotten I was your lover,
    So now I lay in this bed made for two,
    Feeling so hopeless and blue,
    I guess I can try to sleep tonight,
    Only to dream about what I could have done to make this right.
    My body is motionless,
    While my mind is nothing but stress,
    Is this reality the nightmare,
    When I wake you will still be there?

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    BlackButterfly1 commented on Lonely


    I remember the emotions that run through you when you're heartbrokened and I dont wish it on anyone. Great poem.

    duty commented on Lonely


    Love makes the world go round...And that we make think is that....But one thing to my sorrow I have found.....When love goes wrong,....the world goes flat.

    MrGee commented on Lonely


    Very well written poem and shows the aching heart you possess. At times we look at ourselves and wonder what went wrong, but,we cannot always place the blame on ourself. a 10 from me

    Teardrops commented on Lonely


    you have felt the knife of loneness and i hope you find love again great poem Marie

    In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite.

    Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.

    BrokenHeart2009’s Poems (33)

    Title Comments
    Title Comments
    Let Go 5
    A Crush 1
    Waiting For An Answer 2
    Creepy 3
    Question 2
    Endless Fall 2
    Men Are People 26
    Final Words 11
    A Gift to Mankind 6
    Together We Say Goodbye 6
    Your Wife 9
    No One to Save Me From The Dark 5
    In The Beginning 3
    You And Me 1
    My Daughters 7
    Lonely 4
    Don't Leave 2
    The Sounds of a Broken Heart 4
    Regret 7
    Twisted 7
    Hold Your Vows 4
    Love's Bite 3
    Shame On Me For Being With You 11
    The Kiss's Coal 2
    You Reap What You Sow 5
    In Love With A Lie 5
    My Story 5
    Warning 2
    Leave Me 2
    What Do We DO? 3
    Goodbye and a Smile 3
    Adultery's Shame 4
    The Sound of No One 3