The Sounds of a Broken Heart

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    The Sounds of a Broken Heart

    Happy in the darkness, and at peace with the silence,

    Now the dawn has come, and the noises are the reality at every corner,

    Standing here naked open to the pain,

    Seeing the light as it burns through the heart that’s torn wide open,

    No one sees,

    Only passes by,

    As the painful howls pull deep from the broken heart,

    The mind is busy with the pain of the past while the body barely moves,

    Emotions hitting like the waves on the sand,

    Thoughts are so loud they are deafening,

    Thoughts are dark,

    Happy in the misery with no desire to change,

    Only struggle,

    Struggle with the grief,

    The pounding in the mind struggling with the grief,

    The world moves while the body is motionless,

    The mind rejoices as the dark has come back, and silence is its only friend,

    Exhausted from the full stream of pain letting the thoughts fall silent in the mind

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    imalwasymused commented on The Sounds of a Broken Heart

    01-05-2011

    i can't imagine to feel pain like that and hope to never. This poem is dark but beautifully crafted. It's soooo emotional. You have a jewel here. It's brilliant.
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    FranzJ commented on The Sounds of a Broken Heart

    12-30-2010

    letting your emotions the a good thing to do - and you did so in this-thanks for sharing
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    slimgoodwoody commented on The Sounds of a Broken Heart

    12-29-2010

    WOW! "Happy in the misery..." What powerful words! You do yourself well with this poem B.H., keep it up!
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    BreeLove commented on The Sounds of a Broken Heart

    12-29-2010

    I have been here, and its a hard place to come back from. No matter how u got there or the circumstances, there is light at the end of the darkness......... :)
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    Poetry is what is lost in translation.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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