Love's No Chance

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    Love's No Chance

     A teardrop falls
    From the Heaven's above
    Searching for the one
    Eternal true love.

    Two Star crossed lovers
    Lost in the past
    Entangled in a love
    That never will last

    The moon shines it's light
    Twinkling stars all aglo
    Dreaming of a love
    They never will know.

    Seasons pass, cold winds blow
    Snowflakes start to fall.
    The death of winter simply stands still
    Till it harkens the Springtimes call.

    The floral sent of sprouting buds
    And timid green leaves
    encircle themselves, winding through the air
    Upon a soft subtle breeze.

    A love that is thrown
    From to an Fro
    Like poisoned roots
    No hope ever to grow.

    Take up a dandilion
    Cast it into the wind
    It travels forever
    to a land of no end.

    Traveling through the sunshine
    Sliding down the moonbeams.
    Life in this world
    Is never as it seems.

    A love that has no chance
    Lurks to be my fate
    Forever this is my calling
    My life, I simply hate.

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    icu2 commented on Love's No Chance

    03-19-2010

    Really...the writer loves life, but just hates the circumstances...because this is written with such beautiful, sensitive visuals, it shows this. I hope the writer soon has a wonderful fulfilling life.
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    kage commented on Love's No Chance

    03-03-2010

    just a great poem and well worded the rhyme is good and it flows well . some people say things so well and it seems that you have that touch words like "Take up a dandelion Cast it into the wind It travels forever to a land of no end." are a great tribute to you and your writing skill thank you for sharing it
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    saskiab1971 commented on Love's No Chance

    02-24-2010

    This is a great poem. I really enjoyed reading it. I loved the dandilion in the wind part and the poison roots. very visual. very nice.
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    Poetry is when an emotion has found its thought and the thought has found words.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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