missing you

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    i wrote this because my friend could potentially end up dead because of what he is doing

    missing you

    Remember those times you were always there
    Everyday, everynight, the one who cared
    Grabbing my hand when I was scared
    Reliving the past you would always say
    Enjoy the moment, life is to fast
    Trueness embraces my tears when I cry
    So sad now and I have to say goodbye

    So on your burial day
    Overwhelming tears I will shed
    Remembering all those nights
    Remembering the times it was just us
    Overcoming the obstacles we have faced
    Within eachothers hearts
     
    May you rest in peace today
    I have never wanted this day to come
    Sad thoughts trace my mind
    Some that I cant overcome
    I will always remember
    Never forgeting the times we shared
    Go on now and rest in peace

     

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    Poetry is not an expression of the party line. It's that time of night, lying in bed, thinking what you really think, making the private world public, that's what the poet does.

    Allen Ginsberg (1926-1997) U.S. poet.

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