Poet

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    Poet

     Pouring thoughts
    from falling tears
    brought up by despair.

    What's destructive.
    What creates real pain.
    Complicates and weighs down.

    Troubles lost in words
    never forgotten.
    Only lingering on paper
    waiting to be felt
    and understood.

    Thoughts flying off of every
    tear that dropped
    between words, feeling,
    and the day where no one is
    around and with nothing, but
    paper to make emotion
    into words.

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    BrittKun commented on Poet

    11-17-2009

    ????? WOW????? Makes you wounder Really love it keep it up
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    Photojan12 commented on Poet

    10-27-2009

    Sometimes the writing resolves the hurts and helps us to see clearer. Well said
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    CMarsh commented on Poet

    09-21-2009

    Felt like I was on a rollercoaster of emotions with this one. Great job and please keep writing!
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    DeepEclipse commented on Poet

    09-09-2009

    You know it. The paper cries both with me and for me. It befriends me in my madness and backs me up when I'm overwhelmed. With the paper, let loose......
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    Paige

    09/09/2009

    Exactly, this poem is meant to show the connection between the poet and the pen and paper. Thanx for your comments.

    uriah007 commented on Poet

    09-09-2009

    This poem is a more serious side to poetry. I like it. Th anks for sharing.
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    Poetry is either something that lives like fire inside you or else it is nothing, an empty formalized bore around which pedants can endlessly drone their notes and explanations.

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