Alone

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    Alone

     Words rushing through my head
    and never grasping every detail.
    I'm never wanting to forget
    all the emptiness I feel.

    Speeding through every thought,
    perfecting every word.
    Repeating everything to myself
    all waiting to be heard.

    Eyes burning with depression.
    Turning thoughts in to something more.
    Something that can be shared
    and that has never been heard before.

    With all of this time
    and all of this emptiness
    I'll beable to leave the world behind
    to get deeply lost in my mind.

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    BrittKun commented on Alone

    11-17-2009

    I fet like this the world passing me by But you have people that care about you. Like ME!!!! Great Poem I give you a 10!!!!!
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    lonewolf commented on Alone

    11-17-2009

    very nice!, well done. The emotion was very vivid.
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    jue333 commented on Alone

    09-29-2009

    that was heavy..im in a world of solitude..lonely is the path that i also follow..youre a deep writer.....
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    LouisIII commented on Alone

    09-22-2009

    I like this short Poem. I want more, I mean more expression, but then again, maybe your ended it like this so short on purpose? Louis III
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    countrysunshine commented on Alone

    09-22-2009

    very nice! ou can feel the emotions that you wrote
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    Poetry is when an emotion has found its thought and the thought has found words.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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