These Words

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    These Words

    Falling into my stomach,
    crashing to the pits.
    Putting on pressure as if to burst.
    I won't beable to hold it in much longer.

    What's wrong with these words,
    strung together with lies?
    Every word I hear
    only hurts me further.

    I still choose to listen
    with both hope and doubt.
    Which words should I trust?
    What part of me should I listen to?

    It's all very sad,
    wishing I would become numb.
    Numbness won't tear me apart,
    just these words.

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    BrittKun commented on These Words

    11-17-2009

    I have felt confused like this and still do sometimes but you have to know in your heart what are geunuin words. Your friends might lie to you . You have to choose who to trust .People words hurt sometimes so much. But you have to rise above that. I know you can be strong. LOVE THIS POEM GREAT JOB. KEEP IT UP.!!!!!

    CMarsh commented on These Words

    09-21-2009

    Without words there would be no rules or laws to uphold.These words you speak of can make or break us and we must always build each other up with positive words in a constructive way.Nice work ...Please add me to your friends.

    tanmayC commented on These Words

    08-15-2009

    this is deep... makes you think upon it... nice work..

    1990lh commented on These Words

    07-31-2009

    very raw and strong. it pulls you in great write ( : 0

    Platti commented on These Words

    07-07-2009

    Wonderfully dark, my friend, I can feel the emotions being portrayed as if I were the one hurt...10

    Paige

    07/27/2009

    Thanks so much for your rating. I think this poem is my favorite.

    Poetry is either something that lives like fire inside you or else it is nothing, an empty formalized bore around which pedants can endlessly drone their notes and explanations.

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