Promise to Remember...

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    Promise to Remember...


    I need to hold you close to me...
    if only for a while..
    And as the tears slip down my cheeks..
    you turn to me and smile..
    I'll take your laughter with me..
    I'll think of you each day..
    Promise to remember me..
    All along life's way..
    I cannot take you with me..
    But you know I wish I could..
    I guess God has special plans for you..
    If I could stay..you know I would..
    My wishes for you are many..
    The prayers come from my heart..
    Promise to remember me..
    When I'm gone..at your life's start..
    As you close your eyes at night..
    Promise to remember..
    I may be in heaven's arms..
    And with me, always, your love so tender.



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    katrinaLeAnn commented on Promise to Remember...

    11-24-2009

    i would comment but im still crying gosh your good...
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    kidsfirst

    11/24/2009

    thanks. you've been busy, haven't you? i see you've spent some time with me and i love that! i appreciate all the kind words you've sent. i hope to continue to write things you'll like to read. i can tell you are a very sensitive person and, like me, read things with my heart

    Photojan12 commented on Promise to Remember...

    10-22-2009

    Deep and thoughtful. Something we all will experience one day.
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    kidsfirst

    11/24/2009

    thank you so much. i'm glad it touched you. i think when the time is near, we all want to believe we've left a part of us here with the ones we love by the memories we've made with them. thank you again for reading it and liking it.

    Twilight commented on Promise to Remember...

    03-26-2009

    I believe that is everyone's wish...to be remembered.
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    kidsfirst

    11/24/2009

    thank you. absolutely true. death is final but the memories we make last on in the lives of those we leave behind....we hope we've done our very best to make memories that will bring a smile to their faces and laughter in their lives when thoughts of us run through their minds ...that maybe those memories will be shared with others in their lives. thank you again for reading it and for your comment

    In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite.

    Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.

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