When My Life Is Over (3/12/92)

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    When My Life Is Over (3/12/92)


    Who will cry for me?
    When my life is over...
    Cherish my memory?
    When my life is over...
    Will smiles be gone?
    But life go on?
    For a while..but..how long?
    When my life..is over...
    Who will think of me?
    When my life is over...
    Remember..fondly?
    When my life is over...
    I'll wish I'd been...
    More of a friend...
    Please hold my hand...
    Before my life..is over...
    Please hold my hand...
    And understand...
    I want to live...
    Before my life is over...
    I just want to live...
    Before my life is over...

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    Photojan12 commented on When My Life Is Over (3/12/92)

    10-21-2009

    I think we all wonder about this and want to leave something of ourselves behind. That's why I write children's books. That's my legacy. Living at any time in our life is really up to us. If we live well we will be remembered. Good write Thank you
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    Tarlton009 commented on When My Life Is Over (3/12/92)

    09-23-2009

    very inspirational, and a question worth asking yourself everyday. after all we are not guranteed the next breath we take, more less the sun coming up tomorrow. life is to short to not care what others will think, but at the same time you must be happy with yourself...Good work.
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    kidsfirst

    09/23/2009

    thank you so much for your comment. i appreciate your kind words.

    kidsfirst

    09/23/2009

    thank you so much for your comment. i appreciate your kind words.

    Poetry is not a turning loose of emotion, but an escape from emotion.

    T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

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