" To Say good-bye"

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    " To Say good-bye"

    “TO SAY GOOD-BYE”

    Love, to say goodbye I will never ever say
    for to live without you I cannot bear
    Though in wealth we are both bare
    in risks, love make us truly prepared.

    Love, never ever say goodbye
    In times of joy, we happily laughed in chorus
    Misfortunes came and we embraced a little tighter
    for promise we uttered for richer or for poorer.

    Love, hold me so strong when trials make me weak
    Please light my path when in the dark I cannot see
    When I commit so many mistakes
    learn not only to forgive, but also to forget.

    It’s with your care that I have felt gladness
    It’s with your love that I have felt my importance
    But 'tis your tender touch and sweet kisses
    that made me feel like someone who is handsome.

    Love, for short is life a mere minute let us enjoy
    Let us savor its essence and pronounce its value
    Love I say, life has no value without you
    Thus love, say not goodbye, end not our happy life.

     

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    kkirkwood commented on " To Say good-bye"

    06-19-2010

    Love first came from above and I will never have to say goodbye to it. Nice poem
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    wheelsal commented on " To Say good-bye"

    07-06-2009

    You said it and I hope she has read it with tears of love in her eyes. Nice read and keep writing...
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    rossmangeles

    07/06/2009

    I feel so blessed with her love. Thanks for your continued support and encouragement.

    chwriter commented on " To Say good-bye"

    07-06-2009

    I truly feel the love you have put forth in this piece and you expressed it very well,and brought your most inner feelings out in this poem,which is Awesome!!
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    rossmangeles

    07/06/2009

    I wrote this poem dedicated to my girlfriend who is now my very loving wife. She is my source of energy and inspiration. Cindy, I love how you support me by puting valuable critique in my poems. Thank you so much.

    honesty34 commented on " To Say good-bye"

    06-28-2009

    I really love this poem..Very inspiring and honest..I felt the feeling of the words..
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    rossmangeles

    06/29/2009

    I always tried to love with sweetness and "honesty(34)". We have only one life to live and one heart to give. Give the best shot and be not afraid of the consequences. I am so glad that my piece of work have inspired you and I hope that you will not feel it just for a fleeting moment, but will last a little bit longer. Thanks for your kind hearted comment.

    vampirelove commented on " To Say good-bye"

    06-26-2009

    awwwww thats sweet and nice i love that and thats true you never say goodbye to anyone that you love at all
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