repentance

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    • coacher
    • Just posted a poem titled "As I grow older".

    repentance

     

    Repentance

     

    No mortal is perfect, not even I

    I may never be, as hard as I try

    My only sin is not my sin at all

    It’s my neighbor, my brother, who should take the fall

     

    When someone offends me I can never forgive

    Their sin is my master for as long as I live

    Because I’m offended my pride takes control

    Of my life, my joy, and my very soul

     

    It’s not fair that they sin, repent and come clean

    While I harbor feelings, become hateful and mean

    If there is to be justice, I guess it will be

    That when they’re in heaven, they can’t offend me

    For below I will be, it’s where I will live

    Oh I pray my new master will let me forgive

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    icu2 commented on repentance

    12-10-2009

    I wish you would cut it out! You keep making me add your stuff to my favorites list! lol! ....................TEN!

    peacefully commented on repentance

    11-03-2009

    Love it. It is a message to us all that we can and need to forgive. It only hurts us when we can't. Right?

    coacher

    11/03/2009

    Thank you for your comment. My poem came out of my own failings. We must overcome our weaknesses

    Poetry is what gets lost in translation.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

    coacher’s Poems (13)

    Title Comments
    Title Comments
    As I grow older 12
    The edge of darkness 16
    The Stallion 9
    Is my life my own? 16
    The Lords toolbox 5
    Life is good 1
    My Work 3
    Prayer 3
    Michelle 4
    faith 5
    repentance 2
    pride 2
    my mother 6