The Stallion

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    • coacher
    • Just posted a poem titled "As I grow older".

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    The stallion horse can be the best horse if it is handled correctly. 

    He is a family man and protects them with out fail. He is the best catch of the bunch. There are men who are like stallions. They can be the best catch for the right woman. The woman must ride with their man, not ride him.


    The Stallion

    The stallion

     

    As majestic as a mountain

    His tough imposing stature

    Yet softer than a whisper

    Spirit longing for adventure

     

    Free as natures wind

    His great-unbridled soul

    His heart a champion pure

    Growing strong from a foal

     

    His muscular physique

    Is like an oceans wave

    Protecting family members

    Always-fearless gallant brave

     

    Gate elegant as a dancer

    He almost seems to glide

    Running floating like a cloud

    There is power in his stride

     

    Why do we wish to tame

    This spirit wild and free

    And harness his great power

    To work for you and me

     

    Best never to be saddled

    A bridle never to restrain

    His spirit never broken

    Or be guided by a rein

     

    Can we ride together?

    And keep our spirits free

    Because this precious stallion

    Is like you and I could be

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    Madelynn commented on The Stallion

    01-27-2010

    I love the metephore here! WOW Coacher, you brought a whole man-pride kinda thing with this write..Yes, you are way right on this note too, that we as humanbeings are conditioned by our surroundings, and become a redesigned version of who we are meant to be..well,probably! Anyway, this is written with perfect strength and masculinity! Heck, Coacher, almost makes me wish I were a guy!-LOL, nah~I'm to good at being a woman,lol! another 10.-Maddi
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    danmartyjake1 commented on The Stallion

    12-20-2009

    Great imagery. I saw the stallion galloping along freely, beautifully. I also saw a man in your poem. It was very well-crafted...10 from me!
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    haskins commented on The Stallion

    12-20-2009

    This is a wonderfully written poem...You capture freedome in itself. A free spirit. Kind of like a single man..not wanting to be tied down...or woman. It is a beautiful poem...keep writing like this...This is one of your best.
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    countrypoet commented on The Stallion

    12-19-2009

    Great wording and picturesque imagery combine to make this a very memorable poem.This is definitely one of your best poems. Having been around horses most of my life,I can relate to this poem and really love it.Very well written. Terry
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    WordSlinger commented on The Stallion

    12-18-2009

    I really like this, I wrote a long Poem called the Stallions Harem, and I feel the same way you do, and I own horse so I know the feeling and meaning, and yes a good man has to be a Stallion for sure, :) Find your exquisite joy, WS
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    coacher

    12/18/2009

    WS" Thank you for reading this write. It is good to hear positive comments from a pro. I don't have a parrot, but i loved your poem about your birds. Happy holidays. coach

    Poetry is either something that lives like fire inside you or else it is nothing, an empty formalized bore around which pedants can endlessly drone their notes and explanations.

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