stealing a moment 3-27-09

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    stealing a moment 3-27-09

    On a day like tomorrow, no one can turn back,
    whether the sky is blue with happiness,
    or from a storm causing it to be black

    we truly understand that the day can seem bleak
    as we know the day can also be clear,
    but no matter what our problems will never dissapear,

    we can make them right to passify the moment,
    but still deep inside, we know there will be atonement
    for whatever the cause, and for whatever the reason
    stealing a moment in time, feels like committing treason.

    so facing any problems head on and moving through the night
    still brings on morning, and maybe a fight
    people need to know, there is a difference none the less

    and if they have a secret worth telling maybe its time to confess
    for truth they will find, belongs to the heart all along,
    but the words must be found before its lost and all gone.
    what do you ask am i speaking about.
    That one sincere moment where love lives with no doubt.

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    AmadeusEx commented on stealing a moment 3-27-09

    06-29-2009

    intense words, loved the first line of the last part, ive always felt that way and yet i still keep my secrets...you cut to the heart of procrastination in this one...well done

    A poem begins as a lump in the throat, a sense of wrong, a homesickness, a lovesickness. It finds the thought and the thought finds the words.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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