THE PRISON IS OPEN TO US ALL

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    THE PRISON IS OPEN TO US ALL

    The prison is open to us all

    Some in, some out

    For Fate than man-made

    As we are played by Nature

    Like pieces, nay pawns

    Moving to grace or gloom.

    Fate’s undesirable tool,

    The blinded scale peddler

    With fearless dagger drawn

    Chastising the guiltless

    Vindicating the transgressor

    As they are tossed

    Like a float on the

    Wavering wavy waves on water

    As they are pushed

    Like pawns moving to grace or gloom

    On this board of life.

    Man, each of us, blessed

    With vicarious Achilles’ heels

    Our tragic flaws in this drama of life.

    The valiant often plunge headlong

    Into perdition valiantly, while

    The cowardly wait for the law

    With cowering cowardice

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    ListninEar commented on THE PRISON IS OPEN TO US ALL

    05-25-2010

    This is my favorite so far of the few I've read. Like the use of words that sound similar but complimentary, give the poem a nice feel and flow. This is a very cool write. Keep it up!

    mountainlady commented on THE PRISON IS OPEN TO US ALL

    05-20-2010

    I like your work. u have away with words.... hope to read more of ur stuff. ML

    wheelsal commented on THE PRISON IS OPEN TO US ALL

    07-05-2009

    You have me sold with you poetry. "The prison is open to us all" and sometimes we make our own prison.

    CongoNetherland commented on THE PRISON IS OPEN TO US ALL

    07-01-2009

    F***n cool. Again. If I were an agent, I'd sign you. You are amazing Man. I like to think I am good at writing. You're better.

    Poetry is either something that lives like fire inside you or else it is nothing, an empty formalized bore around which pedants can endlessly drone their notes and explanations.

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