Through A Child's Eyes

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I thought I would TRY to write something with a lighter side to it.....its so much more comfortable to stay in the dark and expose torment than to show innocence and trust......Who Knew?.....Go Figure.....SMH

Through A Child's Eyes

In Your Eyes
In your eyes I see innocence reflecting hopes and dreams
My smile holding center court in possibilities yet to be seen
In your eyes I believe in fairy tales and sweet dreams to
Wanting nothing but happiness and great things for you
In your eyes I see miracles to be made and inspiration so true
Teaching and learning from the mistakes I once knew
In your eyes I can do no wrong, anchored as I am to an Angel’s pull
Nothing weighing me down, Insuring your life Full
In your eyes I am as Rich as all the God’s above 
Not for what I can buy, but for my heart filled with so much love
In your eyes I can move mountains and obstacles in a glance
Nothing to heavy, to ensure your life's chance
In your eyes I remain young, rejuvenated and free
No longer taking life for granted, ensuring your history
In your eyes lies the truth of who I am
Not only your mother...but an instrument in God's plan
© C. Lyght  2012


In your eyes, I see innocence reflecting hopes and dreams
My smile holding center court in possibilities yet to be seen

In your eyes, I believe in fairy tales and sweet dreams too
Wanting nothing but happiness and great things for you

In your eyes, I see miracles to be made and inspiration so true
Teaching and learning from the mistakes I once knew

In your eyes, I am grounded... anchored as I am to an Angels pull
Nothing weighing me down, Insuring your life Full

In your eyes, I am as Rich as all the God’s above 
Not for what I can buy, but for my heart so filled love

In your eyes, I can move mountains and obstacles in a glance
Nothing to heavy, to ensure your life's chance

In your eyes, I remain young, rejuvenated and free
No longer taking life for granted, but cementing your history

In your eyes, lies the truth of who I am
Not only your mother...but an instrument in God's plan

© C. Lyght  2012

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Tony5880 commented on Through A Child's Eyes

01-29-2013

I like this poem beautiful format deep in words with the truth! well sritten i wrote a new poem tell me what ya think honestly i really want to learn the word!

cheronld

01/30/2013

Thanks for stopping by and leaving such a nice comment...its appreciated...and I look forward to seeing your words come to life...Cher

BreeLove commented on Through A Child's Eyes

08-02-2012

all i can say is i am a mother, and as a mother i relate, and i absolutely loved this, what an inspirational write! well done cher! Much Luv -Bree

cheronld

08/02/2012

Thank you Bree....I don't have any kids of my own...but my Nieces and Nephew give me all the unconditional love that I would be missing without them.....I'm glad that as a mother....You enjoyed this write....Thanks again...Cher

TREVON commented on Through A Child's Eyes

07-15-2012

This is very very good I really liked it..........................

cheronld

07/17/2012

I'm glad that you liked this write....its so much softer than what usually comes out of me...I'm glad it was so well received....thanks again my friend....Cher

Phission commented on Through A Child's Eyes

06-21-2012

Cher! This is lovely and smooth flowing read. It is more comfortable for you and I to write in our darker styles but you really do "uplifting" quite well. I enjoyed this and I am happy for you, dear dear friend.

cheronld

07/09/2012

Awww....thanks so much Phission....and you are so correct....the darker side of me flows so easily and without much thought....its showing that vulnerability side that absolutely freaks me out....lol.....I'm glad that you found the read somewhat "uplifting"....I so appreciate your time and your valuable insight....Cher

windsongs commented on Through A Child's Eyes

06-20-2012

in your eyes, you write a very beautiful poem of hope for the future, thanks!

cheronld

06/20/2012

Thank you so much for commenting...its my way of tasting the rainbow......Cher

Poetry comes nearer to vital truth than history.

Plato (BC 427-BC 347) Greek philosopher.

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