Through A Child's Eyes

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  • Innocence And Hope

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    I thought I would TRY to write something with a lighter side to it.....its so much more comfortable to stay in the dark and expose torment than to show innocence and trust......Who Knew?.....Go Figure.....SMH

    Through A Child's Eyes
    In Your Eyes
    In your eyes I see innocence reflecting hopes and dreams
    My smile holding center court in possibilities yet to be seen
    In your eyes I believe in fairy tales and sweet dreams to
    Wanting nothing but happiness and great things for you
    In your eyes I see miracles to be made and inspiration so true
    Teaching and learning from the mistakes I once knew
    In your eyes I can do no wrong, anchored as I am to an Angel’s pull
    Nothing weighing me down, Insuring your life Full
    In your eyes I am as Rich as all the God’s above 
    Not for what I can buy, but for my heart filled with so much love
    In your eyes I can move mountains and obstacles in a glance
    Nothing to heavy, to ensure your life's chance
    In your eyes I remain young, rejuvenated and free
    No longer taking life for granted, ensuring your history
    In your eyes lies the truth of who I am
    Not only your mother...but an instrument in God's plan
    © C. Lyght  2012


    In your eyes, I see innocence reflecting hopes and dreams
    My smile holding center court in possibilities yet to be seen

    In your eyes, I believe in fairy tales and sweet dreams too
    Wanting nothing but happiness and great things for you

    In your eyes, I see miracles to be made and inspiration so true
    Teaching and learning from the mistakes I once knew

    In your eyes, I am grounded... anchored as I am to an Angels pull
    Nothing weighing me down, Insuring your life Full

    In your eyes, I am as Rich as all the God’s above 
    Not for what I can buy, but for my heart so filled love

    In your eyes, I can move mountains and obstacles in a glance
    Nothing to heavy, to ensure your life's chance

    In your eyes, I remain young, rejuvenated and free
    No longer taking life for granted, but cementing your history

    In your eyes, lies the truth of who I am
    Not only your mother...but an instrument in God's plan

    © C. Lyght  2012

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    Tony5880 commented on Through A Child's Eyes

    01-29-2013

    I like this poem beautiful format deep in words with the truth! well sritten i wrote a new poem tell me what ya think honestly i really want to learn the word!
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    cheronld

    01/30/2013

    Thanks for stopping by and leaving such a nice comment...its appreciated...and I look forward to seeing your words come to life...Cher

    BreeLove commented on Through A Child's Eyes

    08-02-2012

    all i can say is i am a mother, and as a mother i relate, and i absolutely loved this, what an inspirational write! well done cher! Much Luv -Bree
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    cheronld

    08/02/2012

    Thank you Bree....I don't have any kids of my own...but my Nieces and Nephew give me all the unconditional love that I would be missing without them.....I'm glad that as a mother....You enjoyed this write....Thanks again...Cher

    TREVON commented on Through A Child's Eyes

    07-15-2012

    This is very very good I really liked it..........................
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    cheronld

    07/17/2012

    I'm glad that you liked this write....its so much softer than what usually comes out of me...I'm glad it was so well received....thanks again my friend....Cher

    Phission commented on Through A Child's Eyes

    06-21-2012

    Cher! This is lovely and smooth flowing read. It is more comfortable for you and I to write in our darker styles but you really do "uplifting" quite well. I enjoyed this and I am happy for you, dear dear friend.
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    cheronld

    07/09/2012

    Awww....thanks so much Phission....and you are so correct....the darker side of me flows so easily and without much thought....its showing that vulnerability side that absolutely freaks me out....lol.....I'm glad that you found the read somewhat "uplifting"....I so appreciate your time and your valuable insight....Cher

    windsongs commented on Through A Child's Eyes

    06-20-2012

    in your eyes, you write a very beautiful poem of hope for the future, thanks!
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    cheronld

    06/20/2012

    Thank you so much for commenting...its my way of tasting the rainbow......Cher

    Poetry is not an expression of the party line. It's that time of night, lying in bed, thinking what you really think, making the private world public, that's what the poet does.

    Allen Ginsberg (1926-1997) U.S. poet.

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