LIQUID LIFE....

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LIQUID LIFE....





Taken from a face-book friend of mine....KEITH YOUNG ( author )

LIQUID LIFE.... The flow from scene to scene ...embryonic fluids to underground greens...The brackets that contain the content of liquid...our states of being flows like creeks and streams.... Rivers to oceans...we grow...we come from one drop of rain to become the deepest of seas....picking up drops of wisdom on our path.....picking up relationships as we go...
We grow...we sometimes meander and cross with other streams ...the contrast between fresh water and salt water are as apparent as good is to evil...But we still meander... Remember when we were vibrant rapids spilling over cliffs...and we somehow slowed down and became calmer waters.... The deeper the water the deeper the thought...and the faster the water the more shallow the thought.... like liquid life don't stop...even when the ocean dries and becomes a barren bed of of sand and dust we continue to flow.... Water evaporates from liquid to gas but it still exist....and when our river no longer flows to form oceans we will flow above the earth as vapor....but....WE STILL EXIST... think about it.

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Ming commented on LIQUID LIFE....

01-20-2017

Bravo . . I enjoy reading your work, maybe because, There's so much truth in your poetry. I hate fluff poetry, and this surely isn't that.. -Much Peace

cheronld commented on LIQUID LIFE....

07-24-2014

I so loved this....and the subtlety in its presentation....made it that more special... ."from whence we came...In time...life, shall be reclaimed claimed " ...

A poem begins as a lump in the throat, a sense of wrong, a homesickness, a lovesickness. It finds the thought and the thought finds the words.

Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

cheronld’s Poems (11)

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THE LOOKING GLASS 7
The Ties That Bind 2
LIQUID LIFE.... 2
A Cher N ForeverPoet..
..Monologue
43
LOVE IN LIMBO.... 6
Through A Child's Eyes 7
ABSENT CONVICTION 19
Home for a Heart 9
The Epiphany 5
I WAS BLIND N DID NOT SEE 36
CAN U HEAR ME NOW 37