True Love Prevails

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    True Love Prevails

    Pray Death come not slowly be painless with haste

    My heart lies here dying my will soon erased

    What victories are there in the wars fought and won

    When as soon as ones ended another’s begun

    Still I rise to the challenge as the gauntlets re-thrown

    Giving thanks to the Gods for the mercy they’ve shown

    Driven by passion still blind in my youth

    Believing in dreams as if they were proof

    I’m seeking my true love, a white knight indeed

    With conscience to guide him and courage to lead

    I’ll search till I find him or go to my grave

    Without him I suffer an empty hearts slave

    Let Death be forewarned lest the Gods be unkind

    Take my life if you choose but my heart stays behind

    Only Heaven can say where loves destiny lies

    If my fate is to find him my spirit will rise

    No obstacle stands that will cause me to fail

    When a heart seeks true love it will always prevail

     

     

    Anne Drake

     copywrite 2008

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    countrypoet commented on True Love Prevails

    11-04-2009

    Wow,what a bittersweet and beautifully moving poem.It has a Shakespearean flair to it and is quite memorable.I truly love this poem.

    cliftondurant commented on True Love Prevails

    09-28-2009

    lovely poem you will fine your true love keep on searching for it I have found mine good job

    CMarsh commented on True Love Prevails

    09-26-2009

    Excellent Job! Your vision on love is almost the same as mine,felt like I was in the picture the whole time and the flow was excellent.

    KagenoKitsune commented on True Love Prevails

    09-26-2009

    this is very good poem, i like very much. thank you for sharing such beautiful poetry

    SpiritSong commented on True Love Prevails

    07-17-2009

    Beautiful Anne, the last line was perfect. And yes hope does spring eternal...He will come...only trust and believe.

    The true philosopher and the true poet are one, and a beauty, which is truth, and a truth, which is beauty, is the aim of both.

    Ralph Waldo Emerson, American Poet (1803-1882)

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