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     So many people have used me
    So many people have lied
    so many people have bruised me
    As I brush the tears from my eye

    Someday you will need someone
    and hopefully you'll understand
    that all the battles you mirthlessly won
    through this one you just could not stand

    I wish I could say I would laugh as you cry
    as all the times you had to me
    But I wouldnt just stand and let you die
    For it isn't right, you see

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    pdxgrrll commented on ...............

    07-10-2010

    The simplistic nature of this makes it perfect. Good job.
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