Choking
he tightens the rope he placed around her neck
Pushes her aside, makes her forget
Demolishes what's left of the heart that he broke...
Laughs to himself as he watches her choke
Her world comes crashing down
Crushing all her dreams
He simply lets her drown
Ignoring all her screams
The cruelest joke of all
One simple "I love you.",
Another tale told tall
And she didn't have a clue
To have great poets there must be great audiences too.
Walt Whitman, American Poet (1819-1892)
| Title | Comments | Submitted |
|---|---|---|
| Title | Comments | Submitted |
| Monster | 0 | 03/19/2013 |
| Not Supposed To | 1 | 11/14/2012 |
| What You'e Made Me Hide | 1 | 11/09/2012 |
| Mark Upon Her Soul | 0 | 11/09/2012 |
| Better Off Dead | 0 | 11/09/2012 |
| Time For You to See | 0 | 06/25/2012 |
| Heartbreak | 1 | 02/08/2012 |
| Choking on nothing | 1 | 02/08/2012 |
| Applause | 1 | 02/08/2012 |
| hhghyh | 0 | 02/08/2012 |
| Hands that shaped me | 0 | 02/08/2012 |
| Little white Lie | 0 | 01/05/2012 |
| Run To You | 0 | 12/20/2011 |
| Double Edged Blade | 0 | 12/20/2011 |
| Tear denied | 0 | 12/03/2011 |
| Bruised and Broken | 0 | 12/03/2011 |
| Room Full of People (Modified) | 0 | 12/02/2011 |
| Only Seeing | 0 | 09/02/2011 |
| Invisible box | 1 | 09/02/2011 |
| The Life of 'Me' | 0 | 07/29/2011 |
| The Almighty You | 1 | 07/29/2011 |
| My Darkest Moment | 0 | 07/22/2011 |
| I'd Lie | 0 | 07/20/2011 |
| Worth my time. | 0 | 07/13/2011 |
| Rain Rain | 0 | 04/18/2011 |
| Little Lie | 0 | 04/17/2011 |
| Sidelines | 0 | 02/16/2011 |
| idontcare | 1 | 12/29/2010 |
| True love | 0 | 11/25/2010 |
| Stood My Ground | 1 | 10/16/2010 |
| Hellen Keller | 1 | 08/06/2010 |
| I can | 1 | 08/01/2010 |
| grandpa | 1 | 07/24/2010 |
| I dont care | 0 | 07/24/2010 |
| ............. .. |
1 | 07/10/2010 |
| Let him go | 2 | 06/29/2010 |
| Romeo and Juliet | 1 | 06/28/2010 |
| What's the point? | 1 | 06/28/2010 |
| Pretending | 1 | 06/28/2010 |
| In Her Eyes | 2 | 06/27/2010 |
| Forgetting | 0 | 06/27/2010 |
| Favorite Time of Night | 1 | 06/27/2010 |
| A Better Tomorrow | 0 | 06/27/2010 |
| I don't care | 0 | 06/27/2010 |
| Alright | 0 | 06/27/2010 |
| How Many | 0 | 06/27/2010 |
| Choking | 0 | 06/23/2010 |
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