Invisible box

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    Invisible box
    Trapped, frantic,
    Banging on the walls
    Shouts of pain and sorrow
    A voice distantly calls
    The water crawls upward
    In this invisible box
    On the outside they ignore me,
    Blinded by their orthodox
    A roaring wave of madness
    The water dark and bleak
    And as it slowly fills my senses
    I lay myself to sleep
    Trapped, frantic,
    Banging on the walls
    Shouts of pain and sorrow
    A voice distantly calls
    The water crawls upward
    In this invisible box
    On the outside they ignore me,
    Blinded by their orthodox
    A roaring wave of madness
    The water dark and bleak
    And as it slowly fills my senses
    I lay myself to sleep

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    windsongs commented on Invisible box

    09-02-2011

    sounds bleak-need a hand-good write!
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    When power leads man towards arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the area of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.

    John F. Kennedy (1917-1963) Thirty-fifth President of the USA

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