In Her Eyes

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    In Her Eyes

     In her eyes
    Are a few empty "I love you"'s
    From a few guys
    Who already knew

    In her eyes
    is a world of pain
    too many goodbyes
    nothing to gain

    In her eyes
    tears may form
    because of his lies
    she wishes she was never born

    In her eyes
    is His reflection
    He coldy defys
    her loving affection

    In her eyes
    you will plainly see
    Her heartbroken cries
    As she begs him not to leave

    In her eyes
    pain burns like fire
    she no longer flies
    her wounds are dire

    But his eyes
    Hold no concern
    Only mockery
    as he watches her burn

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    Batitus66 commented on In Her Eyes

    06-28-2010

    Yeeah i like the last stanza: But his eyes Hold no concern Only mockery as he watches her burn
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    ashleyrheanna

    06/28/2010

    yeah thts y i like it too

    ashleyrheanna commented on In Her Eyes

    06-28-2010

    i think this 1 ish my favorite..........................
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    In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite.

    Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.

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