Acceptance

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    Acceptance

     How did I love thee if you only knew
    The oceans could not have held,
    The love that I felt for you
    Our hearts did meld true.

    My days have been so black,
    I know that you  will not be back.
    Tis time for a new beginning,
    We  both shall be winning.

    The skies above shall be no more
    For it twas you that I did adore
    I know my grief must follow its course,
    I can not stop it even by force.

    It is very painful the way it was made
    Now is my acceptance I have yet to see
    Yet once it arrives I shall be free.

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    kitap2006 commented on Acceptance

    08-01-2009

    this is simple and has all the elements that were in the classiest of poems from the past love it
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    photochick commented on Acceptance

    07-22-2009

    this is really deep and passionate You can really feel all of your emotions here great poem the words flow together perfectly with each new line one after the next all the way till the end you diffidently writing from deep within your heart and soul I look forward to reading more of your work great poem 10 in my book
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    Angel197038 commented on Acceptance

    07-18-2009

    Absolutely wonderful! I love the words you have used here to explain your emotion! This is something I feel does come right from your heart and soul where I believe true poetry comes from! A great write! xo God Bless, Helen
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    Poetry is what gets lost in translation.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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