Come With Me and Be My Love...

4 Comments

Tags:
  • Love
    • ,
  • Passion
    • ,
  • Fantasy

    Poem Commentary

    Ladies, I am a widower and lonely to boot.Write me.

    Come With Me and Be My Love...

     Come with me anbd be my love,
    We shall dance the stars above.
    From Sirius to Alpha Centauri we shall prance,
    During our celestial dance.

    Come to me and be my love
    We fit together like hand in glove.
    Assured we'll be alway together,
    Like flocks of geese, birds of a feather.

    All in love we shall be,
    Ae dance across the sea.
    Our hearts shall beat as one
    Beneath the setting sun.

    Come to me and be my love
    Be so pure like the snow white Dove 
    And if I have the chance,
    Tis you and I shall dance.

    Amongst the stars of the heaven,
    We shall become one,
    Swinging and swaying,
    Beneath the Sun 

    Poem Comments

    (4)

    Please login or register

    You must be logged in or register a new account in order to
    leave comments/feedback and rate this poem.

    Login or Register

    SilverGirl commented on Come With Me and Be My Love...

    07-24-2009

    I love this poem. It so reminds me of something I would write. Oh but to find a love so pure. It would be a true blessing. Hugs SG
    Reply to Comment

    mspoet1 commented on Come With Me and Be My Love...

    07-18-2009

    Good poem. Look at the first stanza though. Spelling....lol...anbd??? You meant AND. Guess I got you back for the spelling thing....Couldn't help myself....lol...Good poem though.
    Reply to Comment

    wheelsal commented on Come With Me and Be My Love...

    07-16-2009

    Be careful of cliches "Birds of a feather:" but otherwise a great write. Sally
    Reply to Comment

    Troubador

    07/16/2009

    I understand the cliche' I was however trying to express how we were I understand cliche's take from the emphasis pf the poem however I merely attempted to express our alikeness. Our compatibility could be described as cliche' if the cliche' was true. I have loved and I have not lost actually I gained a greater insight into the human psyche. Sorry about the cliche's

    bforibus commented on Come With Me and Be My Love...

    07-13-2009

    i loved this poem. it had a happy undertone to it. like blissfull or geeky happy. it was innocent and majestic at the same time great job. besides a few mispells this was a great job.
    Reply to Comment

    In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite.

    Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.

    Troubador’s Poems (42)

    Title Comments Submitted
    Title Comments Submitted
    ENAMOURED 1 07/21/2012
    I'M YOURS IF YOU WANT ME 1 06/06/2012
    WE NEEDED EACHOTHER 0 06/05/2012
    STAND WiTH ME 1 05/23/2012
    THE SILENT SPEECH 2 12/03/2010
    THE SILENT SPEECH 0 12/03/2010
    THE SILENT SPEECH 1 12/03/2010
    BE TRUE AND HOLDFAST 2 11/29/2010
    Cacophony 0 11/24/2010
    A Wicked Love Story 4 11/02/2009
    Can You Figure Out The Answer? 0 09/09/2009
    This World Owes Me !!! 0 09/08/2009
    Anonymous 0 09/08/2009
    Read At Your Own Risk 6 09/01/2009
    You Got The Knack 7 08/21/2009
    The Knight's Tale 4 08/21/2009
    The Flame is lit 0 08/20/2009
    Morning Finches 6 08/20/2009
    Monarch & marigold 1 08/20/2009
    The Moth 0 08/20/2009
    XI 0 08/20/2009
    A World of Misery 1 08/20/2009
    Wild Plums 3 08/20/2009
    Waiting To Die 7 08/18/2009
    The Wars of The gods 5 08/13/2009
    It's a Cruel World 8 08/11/2009
    Traveling 6 08/04/2009
    I need to love her 2 07/29/2009
    Mother Knows Best 1 07/23/2009
    This World is falling apart and nobody cares 1 07/20/2009
    Acceptance 3 07/17/2009
    March 24, 2006 14 07/15/2009
    I Have Tried and Tried 3 07/15/2009
    The Sun Rose an Orb 5 07/14/2009
    Come With Me and Be My Love... 4 07/13/2009
    It is an Odd One 2 07/11/2009
    Solutions to a Lonely World 2 07/10/2009
    What can I do? 4 07/09/2009
    Five Haiku 3 07/09/2009
    This is Confusion 2 07/08/2009
    Picking up the pieces 4 07/06/2009
    A NEW TWIST 7 03/14/2009
    Top of Page