Solutions to a Lonely World

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    I hope that people will get the message

    Solutions to a Lonely World

    This is a lonely world
    Everyone looks out for themselves,
    They fotgot the great plan.
    Love one another
    Take care of eachother.

    But, alas is that the case,
    No, I say they have grown complacent,
    They are used to the way it is.
    They should not be.

    Why are they so at ease with themselves,
    Like a good scout they should " be prepared"
    Who knows what is around the corner
    Would it not be better if we faced it together.

    It would no longer be lonely,

    People would take care of eachother,

    ln love with life.
    In love with eachother
    By doing this we love ourselves
    To thy own self be true. 

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    countrypoet commented on Solutions to a Lonely World

    07-16-2009

    This is a truly great poem as well as a sentiment that I share. It would be a much better world if people were more compassionate and would help and encourage one another. We must continue to pray that people everywhere will get the message and strive toward this goal.
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    am2anangel commented on Solutions to a Lonely World

    07-15-2009

    You show a true passion for this piece craving to have people read and understand. I feel you express a wish to have people to quit thinking of themselves and be considerate and caring of others. Well done. I know you are trying to express a message in this and I hope I have at least scratched the surface of your true meaning.
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    Poetry is either something that lives like fire inside you or else it is nothing, an empty formalized bore around which pedants can endlessly drone their notes and explanations.

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