This World is falling apart and nobody cares

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    I feel rather bitter toward those in power and liars of religion.

    This World is falling apart and nobody cares

     This world is falling apart and nobody cares,
    We have people killing eachother and nobody knows why.

    Greed will be the downfall of mankind,
    Killling eachother for the land they do not possess.

    Holding hostage our very breath,
    Attempting to console us with a fact made fiction.

    They all say they worship the one true God,
    If they studied they would know where they made thier mistake.

    One  group says that they are waiting for the end,
    Another says it has already been.

    Magic, witches, demons are real,
    They do not care if they are or not.

    They dig their hole deeper with each breath,
    And all on their minds brings certain death.

    They are of good intentions I am sure,
    Greed has poisoned the minds of them.

    When was the last time a president ever
    Gave a homeless person a place to stay for a night or even a day.

    Like he is so special when he is no different,
    He still craps squatting(at least I hope so).

    Yet this world still falls apart and nobody cares
     

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    bitchywitch commented on This World is falling apart and nobody cares

    07-30-2009

    I like this political perspective. Very raw and to the point.You sound like you have your finger on the pulse of alot of issues here.
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