It's a Cruel World

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  • Confusion

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    I am a little down today so I decided to write my way into a little joy if it is possible

    It's a Cruel World
    It's a cruel world to be sure,
    Murders and mayhems every day,
    In every style, in every way.

    Watch the man in his fine suit,
    Kicking the boy for stealing some fruit
    When the fire comes to destroy.

    It steals the mate whom you love
    and then tells you to believe in a god above
    It has taken away your sense of peace

    Tis a cruel world this a fact
    Cruelty to eachother seems  the norm
    To this world I wish I was never born.

    Karate I have learned discipline not to use
    Yet I continually act out in this ruse
    Take me into your arms my goddess of light

    Remove my presence from this place I roam
    Take me unto your bosom and let me be home
    In you through you and with you I am a mirror

    All that you see I have made in my mind
    And all that you are, you will never find.
    And the curtain fell on the tragedy man.  

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    dumplin commented on It's a Cruel World

    12-08-2009

    The Tragedy Man! Oh I loved this! Thank you very much!
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    dustydai commented on It's a Cruel World

    08-15-2009

    I think this poem is a great write! Ever y word is so expressive and so full of feeling, I hope you really don't feel this way often. Because life is so full of wonderful people, places and experiences, you deserve them ALL, my friend! You have a great talent!!!
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    countrypoet commented on It's a Cruel World

    08-14-2009

    This poem is well written.Though there are many bad things and people in this world,there are still many more beautiful,good people and things.As poets(shamans of hope and vision)we have the pleasure and responsibility to reveal the possibilty of a new and better world.Hang in there and don't lose sight of the great gift you have been blessed with.
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    jademelissa74 commented on It's a Cruel World

    08-12-2009

    Wow! There is such eloquence within each stanza. Taken at face value, this poem emits crying sounds. In personal perspective it simply opens up many routes for discussion. You are very talented. I am amazed.
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    photochick commented on It's a Cruel World

    08-11-2009

    wow as always with your work i am left in awe very deep and from your soul I can feel I hope writing this brought you a lil joy or at least a smile for a while great poem thanks for sharing it ...and know you are truly never alone for you have a list of grand people here that care for you and call you friend even though you may not have met them ......
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