I need to love her

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    I need to love her

     I need to love her,she belongs to me now,
    I will always love her, no matter what
    Her voice is so soft and tender
    And she lusts after me as I do her.

    Tell me when will she be mine?
    When can we share the passions.
    When can we be so bold 
    As not to have our love sold

    I am going to love her at length
    With every ounce of my strength
    I will love her all the time,
    She is all kinds of fine.

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    dumplin commented on I need to love her

    12-08-2009

    How quaint! It seems, though, as though your definition of love is purely sexual. I could be wrong...don't happen very often, but I could be wrong. LOL
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    NJay commented on I need to love her

    07-30-2009

    Love is kind indeed. I see the passion flowing thinking you have her already but the next stanza explain it differently but you absolute resolution is commeding. I like the flow it is beautiful. Nice work.
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