The Sun Rose an Orb

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    The Sun Rose an Orb

    The sun also rises an orb of fire.
    In each nature an angel climbs,
    The heart of truth is pure.
    Flowers wave velvet petals.

    Crimson heavens set the eve,
    Orange cotton candy upon a wall of blue.
    Warmth of creation hold us close
    A gentle wind caress my brow

    A golden sliver glows white,
    Dark blue to deep ebon dims the day
    Shades vanish, night has fallen,
    The babes eyes droop

    Sleep precious child, dream sweet
    Let the true peace dwell in your heaven.

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    shannie76 commented on The Sun Rose an Orb

    11-03-2009

    I love this! The vision it creates is stunning. Great work.
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    countrypoet commented on The Sun Rose an Orb

    11-03-2009

    Wonderfully descriptive,beautiful imagery and nice smooth progressive rhythm reminds me of a lullaby.Very nicely done!
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    loveno1 commented on The Sun Rose an Orb

    07-24-2009

    it was ok i guess.................................
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    Dreamer123 commented on The Sun Rose an Orb

    07-16-2009

    awwww!!! This is such a beautiful, enlighting poem! It helps bring you back up from a bad day! thank you! love it!
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    trocka7 commented on The Sun Rose an Orb

    07-14-2009

    This is absolutely gorgeous, beautiful imagery! I loved every part of this, especially the line, "warmth of creation hold us close", that was so sweet and secure....thank you for sharing this. I just wrote a poem about a sunset about a week ago, entitled "Sunset Salutation", if you want to check it out. This is beautiful, thank you....
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