• Love
    • WrittenJustice
    • just need to know if any of this is worth a damn...thanks!


    You've entered my life once more
    do I dare to look, is it safe to dream
    Scared words spoken, curious to know
    carefull stepping, hard to swallow
    shaky hands, with a trembling voice
    flashback to times of yesterday
    of all the memories,the decision-the choice
    Softest sounds of my name, with your voice

    What luck have I, after all this time
    to look upon you and know you're mine
    the days have passed with the seasons change
    lifes journey unfolded, we both had to know
    to learn the lessons of life, we each had to grow

    Risking whats left, deep within me
    placing my trust in the hands of another
    praying to find a love that is like no other
    the broken heart, is incomplete, peices missing
    not quite whole, forever well wishing
    longing to be healed, made into one
    to have the perfect union, blessed by the Son

    To see your face, the love in your eyes
    encompasing walls crumble and fall
    leaving me vulnerable and open
    awaiting the softest words spoken
    defenses down, the choice no longer mine
    my heart laid bare, forever awaiting
    a love that has held the test of time

    The lightest laughter, perfect lips pouting
    never the anger, never the shouting
    soft music playing, the rustle of sheets
    one arm draped over, an angel to hold
    soft to touch, the heavens to enfold

    I see deep within you, a heart laying broken
    only peices left, remnants of a love once spoken
    Hope filled eyes, a trembeling voice
    the decision clear, no longer a choice
    the hearts walls overrun, emotion pours over

    The hearts wish come true, no longer torn
    our peices fit, the problem solved
    rejoicing in the reunion of the love long lost
    the two peices brought together completely made whole

    SGT knight, gregory M
    OIF 5/6 camp taji iraq




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    saramahaney commented on ANGEL FACE...


    Yes we are still together. He was my high school sweetheart and we went different directions but found eachother again 2 1/2 years ago. We are still holding strong and have a child together now. I used to tell him what is meant to be will always be. Have faith. :)

    Mandi commented on ANGEL FACE...


    A true love story... Did it work out? You definetly have a way with words. There must be more to the story. Very nicely written. Do you stay together? Inquiring minds want to know.

    alreedus commented on ANGEL FACE...


    It is as if your words floated into place to form a natural soft cascade across my heart.

    koolmom0 commented on ANGEL FACE...


    This is very good. The flow a rythem are excellent. Good write my friend. :) Koolmom

    kpeery09 commented on ANGEL FACE...


    This is very nice, the rhyming I saw was excellent, and you deffinitly know how to orgainize the words to make a good flow within the poem. Keep it up.

    In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite.

    Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.

    WrittenJustice’s Poems (23)

    Title Comments
    Title Comments
    " Camaro" 4
    " TRANS AM" 1
    " Rachell" 3
    My old Friend 4
    Collector of Souls 8
    ANGEL FACE... 10
    GUILTY... 6
    TRUTH TOLD... 5
    LAYIN IT DOWN... 1
    HATRED... 3
    DAMNATION... 1
    BLIND... 1
    WINTER... 1
    Betrayal 3
    Manevolence 0
    WAR.... 1
    ALONE... 0
    Love... 0
    Love of Misfortune...
    SALVATION... 1
    LIFE..... 0