WINTER...

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    WINTER...


      Early winter summers blight
    snow decending blanket white
     Sun is shining, sky of blue
    children's faces a rosy hue
     Eyes that sparkle smiles wide
    sleds in tow walking side by side
     Frozen breath from little faces
    advantage taken of winters graces
     Pine trees always of ever green
    now ly coated with icy sheen
     Rivers and streams ran uncaring
    now frozen over skaters daring
     Winters chill is ever cold
    wind that blows is always bold
     Drift on drift of white on white
    children gather for the snowball fight
     Those who don't do other things
    making snow angels halos and wings
     The sun is setting it's time to come in
    not to worry tho it's snowing again...

    SPC Knight Gregory M.
    U.S. Army Kuwait OIF 1

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    BDIsernhagen commented on WINTER...

    06-18-2009

    wonderfully, nostalgic, but hopeful. Beautiful lyricism. thanks you for posting!

    Poetry is either something that lives like fire inside you or else it is nothing, an empty formalized bore around which pedants can endlessly drone their notes and explanations.

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