PUSHED ASIDE...

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    • WrittenJustice
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    PUSHED ASIDE...


     Blue waters ripple pushed by the wind
    thoughts from the mind stir the soul within
     Sunlight streaks down a golden beam to grace
    reflections off the water touches my face
     As I sit and wonder why did it have to be
    why couldn't I see, why was it me
     What did I do, what have I done
    actions unkown consequences begun
     You heard from another, words I've not spoken
    peices in your hands of a love now broken
     What we once shared you have cast aside
    slamming the doors to where I did reside
     One by one feelings released
    forced to leave, pushed away
    you've done too much now only memories remain
     Feet in the sand salted breeze to taste
    adrift in my mind, reflected on my face
     You're no longer needed, not part of my life
    consider the lesson learned
    this is the last time that I get burned
     Cold wind blowing, chill down my spine
    the memory of what was is all thats left behind

    SPC Knight Gregory M.
    U.S.N. Gordon after OIF 1

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    redbloodink commented on PUSHED ASIDE...

    02-24-2010

    well this was a breezy write.... took me on a trip to a tropical place... thanx....... red

    Kaylimazza commented on PUSHED ASIDE...

    02-22-2010

    I like it. nice work. and poems are always worth reading ya know. i give you 10!

    Poetry is what is lost in translation.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

    WrittenJustice’s Poems (23)

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