• Anger
    • WrittenJustice
    • just need to know if any of this is worth a damn...thanks!


      Upon a once chance meeting
    perfect white smile fleeting
    deepest are the eyes of green
    silken skin of marble sheen
      Casual talking leads to moonlit walking
    face to face with a lovers embrace
     hands clasped together heads held high
    the sun forever shining we shall never die
     Words of love were spoken true
    but acts and deeds gave love another hue
     Lies soon fell from flawless lips
    hands that were held together,
    now slide to fingertips
     Crystal tears, from a porceline face
    once held high now fallen grace
     love once born of two hearts spoken
    trust was shared and now lies broken
     Shattered dreams of lives entwined
    once blessed be now cast aside
     Delicate fingers of a silken hand
    now are barren of the golden band
     upon reflectioin of pain umbearing
    suffer the choice of a life uncarring

    SPC Knight Gregory M.
    U.S. Army OIF 1 IRAQI International Airport


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    Sydney commented on Betrayal


    this is really good. i like the flow of your poem. theres nothing i could change in it.

    Shajami commented on Betrayal


    I really really like this one! I honestly can't think of criticism u have natural talent! Good job hun! ~Sha~

    justme1970 commented on Betrayal


    WOW..... this is a great poem. A great story. And unfortunately very true for alot of people. I enjoyed reading this and look forward to many more.



    thank you very much...obviously i am a soldier but its nice to hear opinions from people besides those i work with..

    Poetry is not an expression of the party line. It's that time of night, lying in bed, thinking what you really think, making the private world public, that's what the poet does.

    Allen Ginsberg (1926-1997) U.S. poet.

    WrittenJustice’s Poems (23)

    Title Comments
    Title Comments
    " Camaro" 4
    " TRANS AM" 1
    " Rachell" 3
    My old Friend 4
    Collector of Souls 8
    ANGEL FACE... 10
    GUILTY... 6
    TRUTH TOLD... 5
    LAYIN IT DOWN... 1
    HATRED... 3
    DAMNATION... 1
    BLIND... 1
    WINTER... 1
    Betrayal 3
    Manevolence 0
    WAR.... 1
    ALONE... 0
    Love... 0
    Love of Misfortune...
    SALVATION... 1
    LIFE..... 0