BLIND...

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    BLIND...

    Laughing are their voices for I know my own name
    their words strike deep giving life  to the pain
     Hardly any memories , voices but no faces
    are all that I can see
     Dark as pitch, black as night
    never a sunrise within my sight
     Gentle breezes with fluid grace
    the use of hands to see thier face
     Every day I carry on step by step
    to my own song
     Cursing this prison my eyes of no vision
    frustration of the loss yet finding strength
    within the cross
     Walking stick at my side, will unbroken
    I walk with pride....

    SPC Knight Gregory M
    U.S. Army Kuwait OIF 1

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    mariadapoesia commented on BLIND...

    02-24-2010

    Such strong image! I image a war scene, where friends try to stick by each others sides despite the hidden enemy's traps... am I right?

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    Walt Whitman, American Poet (1819-1892)

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    Collector of Souls 8
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    GUILTY... 6
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    LAYIN IT DOWN... 1
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    DAMNATION... 1
    BLIND... 1
    WINTER... 1
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