Closer to You

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Closer to You

There's people all around me
A swarm of anger and angst
I don't know what to do...I'm losing my grip
My head is down, ashamed of what I've done
I didn't mean to, I told you a thousand times
When you're on the edge you want to fall
But you caught me
You didn't want me to give up
You were there and I hated you for that.
Why were you always there?
I hate you, I hate you, I hate you
You're just telling me all the time what's wrong with me
What I can do better
I misinterpret your kindness for critisism
I hate you!
Then I notice you are closer
Your hand is in mine
"I'm not letting go until you're ready"
I can't say anything...I'm paralyzed
My voice is broken in small pieces
Small breaths form my lips in an odd shape
I'm closer to you.

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Poetry is when an emotion has found its thought and the thought has found words.

Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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