Sanctuary

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Inspired by the lake a mile down from my home. Very beautiful. Also in respects to all of those my friends and myself have lost along this path of life. Rest in Paradise Joey.

Sanctuary

The sun hugs my arms in brown
Trees swaying in the thinnest of air
The rush of the water is coming
I feel it in my sneakers
I walk downhill
My thoughts censoring the noise around me
Carry me into the day and promise no return
A step into the red earth
The ancestors of my people greet me with their wings
Butterflies follow my path
Chasing away the loss I felt at the top
Soon my feet stand beside the water
It goes on forever in a deep green or teal
As if I can walk on to it
Throwing pebbles into the lake
I close my eyes and I think of you
You would have loved this place
I go to my secret place
Where no one can see me
And touch the water
There can never be a photoshopped photo of this perfection
The water has caught my attention
Breathing in the clear air
I have found my sanctuary.

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Poetry comes nearer to vital truth than history.

Plato (BC 427-BC 347) Greek philosopher.

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