Eclipse

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It is VERY obvious where I got my inspiration for this piece from! THE OTHER SIDE by Bruno Mars, Cee-Lo, and B.o.B! Oh and that one book called Eclipse. ENJOY! haha

Eclipse

The moon is in crescent form
My heart beats in excitement
I run along the woods
Waiting for my limbs to warm
Men in hoods,
They know my secret
And I know theirs
There is a sudden enlightenment
One I cannot explain
My body screams, collapsing, unfair
I embrace the change
Becoming something no one can contain
The amber fur exclaims through my skin
Eyes the color of an empty night
My heart eclipses within
Torn dress lies beneath leaves, half in the river
A growl forms in my throat
Anger filling my lungs, so hot I can't shiver
Howling at the moon
Loud and powerful
Running quick in to the night.

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Poetry comes nearer to vital truth than history.

Plato (BC 427-BC 347) Greek philosopher.

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